18 August 2009

FAITH

A seventeen year old boy left home one midnight. It has been six years.The girl who loved him has married someone else. His brothers and his father forgot him when the property was to be shared. His sister stopped buying Rakhi for him.

His mother always insists every night: "Please, leave the door open."

7 comments:

Only Vimal said...

Why? Is running away the solution to the problem?

Abhishek Behera said...

@ only Vimal: I don't know. I even don't know why he ran.

Anonymous said...

abhi is there any particular reason/experience behind the idea of this piece

Unknown said...

sorry the above post was mine :(

Dhiman said...

A true 55-Fiction .... very nice ....

Shilpa Garg said...

A nice expression!! :)

Tulika said...

Reading this I realize that i have missed brilliant pieces.

I'll read them all. Yeah, it wud take some time.