24 February 2010

55 Fiction:

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"It's a boy".

Every time the doctor had said these words, the entire corridor would burst with cheers. Even strangers would rush in to congratulate the father.

Today no such thing happened.

Instead two men in uniform uttered brisk words and left hurriedly.

That was all the doctor could say about the found body parts.

(p.s.: you may like these: Sin of the midnight, Erotica Limited and Faith)

8 comments:

Pramathesh said...

That was something.

Priya said...

A total mystery till the end. Good one.

Anwesa said...

A total hit for me...though somehow I failed to get that "chill" in my spine..like I did for your previous 55F posts.

Tulika said...

Shudders. Again.
Haunting!

Tales of unexpected.
Brilliant piece.

ps: thanks for the special name there. :)

Bikram said...

ooooohh nice one.. sent a tingle down the spine reading the last line.. I mean from a height of JOY to suddenly get down so low..

Good work.. excellent..

Dhanya said...

Totally different from the ones I have read so far! Whoa!

Abhishek Behera said...

@ all: thanks all :)

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