18 April 2010

MYOPIA


















Ocular defect
With smile you concluded
And on a piece of white paper
Glasses you recommended.

What would you recommend for
A mind that refuses to see beyond
The nearest hedonistic veil
When it decides?

14 comments:

Anwesa said...

I wish there was an answer for the question.


Brilliant lines !

Aniket said...

Good one!

Aayushi Mehta said...

Hahah, I would recommend Far-sightedness for that mind!!! ;)

Loved this.

Abhishek Behera said...

@ anwesa didi: thanks :)

@ Aniket: thank you :) it's been sometime since you last posted. hoping to see you blogging soon.

@ Aayushi: waah :)

Shriti said...

waaah.. nice! x)

Anonymous said...

The sky and the earth,walking past,
yearning to be one.
To be together,differences invisible,
they wait for the horizon..

This does not really answer your question. But, it totally spurred out of my insane mind after reading those utterly beautiful lines.
Cheers!

Abhishek Behera said...

@ himanshu: wow. genius, you are. the picture needed these words.

Tulika said...
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Tulika said...

I do not suffer from an ocular defect but I can identify with the obscure one.
Piercing indeed.

Brilliant expression.

Abhishek Behera said...

@ choco-lover: :)

@ tulika: glad you liked the poem. :)

Anonymous said...

The best of the french girls is here , you can be Happy ! :P
Nice blog btw ;) .
X.O.X.O ^^

Felicity said...

I loved this one - the symbolism is just perfect.

Abhishek Behera said...

@ anonymous: ah, thank you :)

@ Amrita: thanks :)

Pooja said...

Brilliantly written!