03 June 2010

Three seconds

When I am least expecting
You barge into my mind
Disarm all my defenses
And sedate me against my will

And I feel 'melting away'
Slowly in chunks

16 comments:

Tulika said...

And I feel 'melting away'
Slowly in chunks

Vivid Sim..It's just too vivid.. you have sort of mastered this thing.
Kudos! :)

Lovely read. thanks.

Tulika said...

ps: What's with the title of this post?

Aayushi Mehta said...

I like :)

Priya said...

Romantic thoughts.

Anwesa said...

:)


Sweetilicious !

Anonymous said...

"3 seconds" and "melting away slowly in chunks" - interesting :P

Cheese pizza ?
Industrial polymer manufacturing techniques ?

Or is this the rare instance when you're serious about what you're writing? :P

Really Nice :)
Keep posting...

Varun said...

Ice Cream dude. It doesnt take 3 seconds for cheese to melt.

Anonymous said...

Oh! I guess I was projecting my thoughts onto the poem...

Missing cheese pizza :P

Abhishek Behera said...

@ Tulika: hmm... i didn't know until you told me :) the things you experience for real are much easier to describe

and the title? that is arbit :)

@ Aayushi: thanks :)

@ Priya: :)

@ Anwesa: i love that word! Thank you :)

@ Anubhav: you got imaginations! but it was something else.

@ Varun: not the ice-cream :P and i don't want you guess either. how are you? how is Pune?

Usha. said...

hey, gr8 being back to the blog world :) read all ur posts ive missed..boy, u've grown-rather, ur experiences have grown :)
nice one, this.

dethsoul said...

ahem ahem.... i see that you have not mentioned the gender of the person anywhere... i hope its a she!!! lol... nice post though... deep!!! for whome??:D

Abhishek Behera said...

@ Usha: heyyy! long time.. thank you. yep, perhaps i grew up :P

@ Dethsoul: haha :P ;)

Pooja said...

:)

lovely!

A Fineapple said...

wow..!! tht was simply superb..:)

Abhishek Behera said...

@ pooja: glad you liked it.

@ arpitha holla: ty :)

Sirisha R said...

Hello Sim!! Awesome post! I came across this blog through a mutual friend's blog, a few weeks back. (And I'm already a fan :P) I have read some of your blogs and from what I noticed, you have a very candid style of writng and the blogs have a "vocal" element(dnt know if there's a word for it, blame it on my poor vocab), its almost as if someone's sitting next to me and speaking out. Keep up the good work. Best wishes :)