A droplet first in the darkness
Coalescing with tiny other few
Creeping and engulfing and growing...
Like the mist-drops of morning dew.
In silence. In solitude.
And then suddenly - it is so heavy oneday
That it slides down like a loud drop
Creating splashes and waves everywhere everyway.
Coalescing with tiny other few
Creeping and engulfing and growing...
Like the mist-drops of morning dew.
In silence. In solitude.
And then suddenly - it is so heavy oneday
That it slides down like a loud drop
Creating splashes and waves everywhere everyway.
15 comments:
I.N.T.E.N.S.E :)
Lovely usage of words...
'words of wisdom :P' Someone is in a gyaan giving mood, it seems :)
rain rain dont go away
come come everyday
:D
hey,ur a certified poet & writer.
ur creativity is exceptional.mark my words..
@ kido: :)
@ joiedevivre: thanks for visiting the humble blog of mine.
please rain rain comments..
but it never rained. :D
@ anwesa: thanks. :)
Subtle yet provoking write this is :)
It has got the both content and the flow.
Very well crafted :)
Btw Thanks for dropping by my place :) :)
Glad to have you in there
bhai...!!! mere level se upar ja chuka hai tu ab.... mujhe kuchh nahi palle pada!!!
BTW who's "joiedevivre".... ;)
nice blog you have here :)
love the verses //That it slides down like a loud drop
Creating splashes and waves everywhere everyway//
brings back memories :)
Quite a thought!
@ nan: i love new visitors!! thanks :)
@ jumper: hehe :)
@ ghost-particle: i read ur verses - very mature and deep. thanks for gracing my blog :). i would be glad to hear some suggestions for improvements from you.
@ rakesh vanamali: thanks for visiting :) thanks :)
getting too philosophical..well better smething if u dont have anything left..touching really! :D
me getting too lazy..though
beautiful and brilllllllliiiiiiaaanntttttttt :)
OMG!!
just lovely.....
so imaginative...
i can feel the drops :)
i guess its time that everybody knows u as a POET!!
its time u r really awarded for ur shining creativity man!!
Fabulous.. simpy astounding.
Bt,if u don't use the ps (it helps though) then the magnitude increases.
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